bone loss in Chinese women更准确。

　　(5) Efficacy and safety of therapeutic angiogenesis from direct myocardial administration of an adadenoviral vector expressing vascular endothelial growth factor 165改为Efficacy and safety of an adadenoviral vector expressing vascular endothelial growth factor 165 on angiogenesis by myocardial injection in swine.“Injection”比“administration”更准确删除direct并不影响对文题的理解应当注明实验动物否则会让人误以为是临床实验。

　　(6) Nuclear factor κB in signal conduction of protein kinase C in T lymphocytes from asthmatic guinea pig model.在文题前加Role of 更准确些。

　　(7) Renal cell carcinoma related novel gene GYLZ-RCC18: GYLZ-RCC18: cloning and functional studies改为Cloning and functions of Renal cell carcinoma related novel gene GYLZ-RCC18:GYLZ-RCC18 from patients. Cloning and functions是中心词所以要前置;因患者属于特殊人群所以应注明。

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